A wide array of charming characters, and an intriguing story that I'm excited to see where it goes next. Mood and atmosphere is set superbly, and emotions are so well induced that you really feel a part of the story. The character customisation really shines in the behaviour choices, really personalising the protagonist to the player's liking, which further immerses them into the story. I have to say though, while there are not MANY, there are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors that could use fixing.
I love the story so much! theo and viktor have my heart rn
question: i noticed a couple of errors (minor spelling/grammar stuff and one instance where it seemed like a code error with one of the choices). do you have any way for us to submit these to you (like a tag on tumblr or a form etc.) or is this more of a thing where we should ignore them for now?
anyways, really looking forward to where this goes!
(and btw I love fallen lights too! haven't gotten around to your other IFs yet but I probably should, lol)
Going to come out of my lurking here to say how much I love this game/story and to report a small error I run into the second chapter.
First of all, as I said I love the story so much! I love the plot (it's so original and funny enough I love the idea of playing as a "unchosen" one), the writing is great and I like all the options given to our characther. I love the fact that we can choose our species. And the characthers! Let me say I have never switched of RO so fast: I went in planning to romance Lucia/Lucien, but by the end of the first chapter Theo and Viktor had completely won me over and I couldnt be happier to see that there was a poly router for them. I mean, i'm still planing to create a second MC to romance Luci (and maybe even more for other RO's) tho, but I completely fell in love with those two.
Unfortunately, I run into an error at the beggining of the second chapter when choosing the option below that doesn't allow me to keep reading:
I don't know if this its the appropoate place to report this, and If that's the case then I apologize. Also, english it's not my first language so I also apologize for any possible error!
Im so sorry Harlow. I know you've probably been through a lot lately. But wtf???? That is not how you start a conversation. And on top of that Viktor's gonna flip when he realizes MC is gone. Amazing update as usual. Looking forward to the next.
Well jesus Harlow like my MC doesn't have enough shit going on already 🙄 this was so good. And you said the next update is tomorrow. How u spoil is. Tho lord knows how I'm gonna choose a RO route with characters written so well. Makes it super difficult tho Theo is a frontrunner so far. And who am i kidding I'm probably gonna wanna romance everyone that hates me and the voice in mc's head 😅🤣
Thank you :') so happy to hear I don't have to ditch/friendzone Viktor when wanting to see other romance option playthroughs, or at least the other ones I was interested in, I love him too much
Whoa, alright, I sprinted through the first chapter in a delighted frenzy. So far, my favorite character is Theo, with her spunk and irreverence. Vik is a very reassuring character. And I'm looking forward to learning more about that other Siren, whose name has already slipped my mind— but not for lack of interest! There were just so many names to remember, so many characters with unique profiles. Ack, this is great! Happily anticipating updates to come~ ^^
I like that I get to choose what species I want to be. As a mermaid fan, I picked siren without a second thought. Then after picking that, I get to choose how my scales would look? You have no idea how happy that made me feel.
It was an immediate heart-eyes when I met Penelope.
What happened between Theo and Cam was so funny, and despite my better judgment, I was actually curious about Cam and wanted to talk to them.
Help I love this!? Its already an amazing blend between school life and fantasy, and the cast relationships are written very well. I very much enjoy seeing how past events can impact character relationships, and the fact that popularity plays into the story too, makes the "high school" aesthetic feel much more real. Overall 10/10, wonderful start!
Oh wow, that literally blew me away a little! Very nice! The emotional responses are super well portrayed and authentic and thankfully the chara creation was mostly painless and pretty fast. It's fairly short, but already there is so much nuance to the attitude and relationships and I look forward to see it all play out! Thank you for writing, coding and sharing, I'm sure it was a pain, but I hope you had at least as much fun as I did skipping around and reading this!
Awww yeah! I've been waiting for this game since I saw it on tumblr, and this was great so far! The writing is nice, and the UI is very sleek, very fun. The characters so far are quite charming, and the MC's backstory seems to be quite intriguing. Can't wait to meet the new chosen one and our ex and give them a ....decidedly warm welcome. Excited for more!
← Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Them💕. Just. Them😭. Veo or Thiktor anyone?
A wide array of charming characters, and an intriguing story that I'm excited to see where it goes next. Mood and atmosphere is set superbly, and emotions are so well induced that you really feel a part of the story. The character customisation really shines in the behaviour choices, really personalising the protagonist to the player's liking, which further immerses them into the story. I have to say though, while there are not MANY, there are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors that could use fixing.
Love it, such a detailed story so far.
Will there be light mode?
Holy crap im inlove this is so amazing i cant wait to see what else is to come thank you you're amazing ! Great job :)
The update is everything i wanted. Omg the dread of facing an ex that was so real and raw. Just wonderful 😭♥️
Theodore is so precious 😭
I love the story so much! theo and viktor have my heart rn
question: i noticed a couple of errors (minor spelling/grammar stuff and one instance where it seemed like a code error with one of the choices). do you have any way for us to submit these to you (like a tag on tumblr or a form etc.) or is this more of a thing where we should ignore them for now?
anyways, really looking forward to where this goes!
(and btw I love fallen lights too! haven't gotten around to your other IFs yet but I probably should, lol)
an update??????????w
please i need moreeeee i love this
ahhh i need to know what happens next!
I swear I read something similar before. Is this a sequel or a rewrite? Either way I'm loving it.
You might be thinking of "the one chosen" over on choices. Also loving this one tho
I thought so. Did you write that one as well?
UGH WHYYY. what with the cliffhanger!! 😭
Going to come out of my lurking here to say how much I love this game/story and to report a small error I run into the second chapter.
First of all, as I said I love the story so much! I love the plot (it's so original and funny enough I love the idea of playing as a "unchosen" one), the writing is great and I like all the options given to our characther. I love the fact that we can choose our species. And the characthers! Let me say I have never switched of RO so fast: I went in planning to romance Lucia/Lucien, but by the end of the first chapter Theo and Viktor had completely won me over and I couldnt be happier to see that there was a poly router for them. I mean, i'm still planing to create a second MC to romance Luci (and maybe even more for other RO's) tho, but I completely fell in love with those two.
Unfortunately, I run into an error at the beggining of the second chapter when choosing the option below that doesn't allow me to keep reading:
I don't know if this its the appropoate place to report this, and If that's the case then I apologize. Also, english it's not my first language so I also apologize for any possible error!
Definetly keeping an eye on the story!
Hello! I’m so glad you like the story. Unfortunately that’s not an error with the game but typically an error with the browser/storage of your device.
Oh didn't know that, sorry for the bother!
Im so sorry Harlow. I know you've probably been through a lot lately. But wtf???? That is not how you start a conversation. And on top of that Viktor's gonna flip when he realizes MC is gone. Amazing update as usual. Looking forward to the next.
Well jesus Harlow like my MC doesn't have enough shit going on already 🙄 this was so good. And you said the next update is tomorrow. How u spoil is. Tho lord knows how I'm gonna choose a RO route with characters written so well. Makes it super difficult tho Theo is a frontrunner so far. And who am i kidding I'm probably gonna wanna romance everyone that hates me and the voice in mc's head 😅🤣
that was said a day ago, so I'm guessing this IS the update. sorry to burst that bubble.
Man I always love cliffhanger 😭
Joke aside, I really love the update and as usual I can't wait to see more of this.
Wooow I love it ! Do we know if the next update is on work ? ^
The next public update is actually tomorrow at 8pm EST!
Oh great ! :3
this is beautiful!
for anyone wondering these are the poly routes :
*Poly Routes are Viktor/Theo, Cameron/Luci, Viktor/Luci, Cameron/Avery, Charlie/Avery, Cameron/Theo, Cameron/Viktor, ???/Harlow
Thank you :') so happy to hear I don't have to ditch/friendzone Viktor when wanting to see other romance option playthroughs, or at least the other ones I was interested in, I love him too much
Oh thanks ! A little close friend x Me x Hurtful ex is great !
Whoa, alright, I sprinted through the first chapter in a delighted frenzy. So far, my favorite character is Theo, with her spunk and irreverence. Vik is a very reassuring character. And I'm looking forward to learning more about that other Siren, whose name has already slipped my mind— but not for lack of interest! There were just so many names to remember, so many characters with unique profiles. Ack, this is great! Happily anticipating updates to come~ ^^
I like that I get to choose what species I want to be. As a mermaid fan, I picked siren without a second thought. Then after picking that, I get to choose how my scales would look? You have no idea how happy that made me feel.
It was an immediate heart-eyes when I met Penelope.
What happened between Theo and Cam was so funny, and despite my better judgment, I was actually curious about Cam and wanted to talk to them.
I love this so much.
Excited on how the story will play out!
As another siren i simply need to befriend Penelope, I want silly fish talks.
Viktor is the cutest but perhaps Theo is competing with him in "i may or not may be the best character in this game" part.
Charles is a bit nervous but i hope he gets we could be friends as well, though my self conscious tell me that i shouldn't trust the quiet sweet one.
My MC is quietly wandering I'd they're going bonkers for real, maybe they will
I am literally in love with Theo AAAA😭😭 It was fantastic so far can't wait for more ;)) <3
Amazing so far :) can't wait for more
This update was amazing!! I loved the different interactions you can have.
hshsdhsdfhg mmm this is sick :DDD i've also noticed a small error in the 2nd chap when you're chosing who to sleep nearby + romatic option
amazing work so far, love the progress :D
I tried to get the poly Route first play through. Stfu Viktor and Theo are cute as hell and I’m stupid soft-
I hope it's will update soon, I'm really hooked with this story (ू˃̣̣̣̣̣̣︿˂̣̣̣̣̣̣ ू)
When's the next update coming ;_;
Ooo I enjoyed this demo. :)
Love the game can't wait till pay day to support you a bit lol
Hey, just wanna tell you how much I've enjoyed the demo and absolutely can't wait to read more!!
I think I might know who the wraith is–
I almost screamed when the demo ended!!
i love it, i can't wait for more!
I am totally in love with this so far~
Help I love this!? Its already an amazing blend between school life and fantasy, and the cast relationships are written very well. I very much enjoy seeing how past events can impact character relationships, and the fact that popularity plays into the story too, makes the "high school" aesthetic feel much more real. Overall 10/10, wonderful start!
Oh wow, that literally blew me away a little! Very nice! The emotional responses are super well portrayed and authentic and thankfully the chara creation was mostly painless and pretty fast. It's fairly short, but already there is so much nuance to the attitude and relationships and I look forward to see it all play out! Thank you for writing, coding and sharing, I'm sure it was a pain, but I hope you had at least as much fun as I did skipping around and reading this!
Awww yeah! I've been waiting for this game since I saw it on tumblr, and this was great so far! The writing is nice, and the UI is very sleek, very fun. The characters so far are quite charming, and the MC's backstory seems to be quite intriguing. Can't wait to meet the new chosen one and our ex and give them a ....decidedly warm welcome. Excited for more!
Yes a new one!! Just finished Fallen Lights the other day, time to try this one out
Ayyy Fallen Lights fans unite!