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Does anyone know if this WIP is still being worked on? There hasn't been any update for a long time.

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Writing four interactive stories in parallel? You must be great at compartmentalization!

I haven't started any of them yet, so which would you recommend that I try first to get me hooked? (For me the biggest barrier to entry is the whole infidelity love-polyangle thing)

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Disenchanted is the one to start with, no doubt about it; then Fallen Lights. The other two aren't far enough along yet to really sink teeth into. Though The Unseelie starts promisingly. Which isn't to say, there's something wrong with Reaper's Bay, just that very little of it has unfolded.

Adulterous choices are clearly labeled with a flower, distinguishing them from romance options which are labeled with a heart, making it easy to avoid them. So thanks for that!

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With such gluttony for embarrassing yourself, you must be quite the masochist, huh.


> Edit: Putting this as a reply to my own comment because this person blocked me after spouting their hateful bullshit so I can't reply to them LMAO

You throw a hissy fit about my blocking you, but conveniently neglect to mention that you blocked me first, after I called out your "spouting hateful bullshit", as you so aptly put it ... "LMAO" indeed.


I recommended consulting a proper dictionary or two, before embarrassing yourself so brazenly. I'm not sure how you managed to make the leap from "a proper dictionary or two" to Google; that is quite telling in its own right, but whatever feeds your auto-humiliation fetish.

My advice clearly hinged on the erroneous assumption that you could read. Giving you that much credit was admittedly presumptuous of me, as proven by such further brazen dishonesty as:

> If a married couple wants to have a threesome, or bring a third into their relationship CONSENSUALLY that is still not adultery by this definition.

>By the way, using this definition means married gay couples can't practice adultery.

> It also says that a married person making out or dry humping or being in love with someone else isn't considered adultery.

> There is no unfaithfulness.

> Adultery and infidelity are not the same thing as polyamory.


Since reading comprehension is clearly still somewhat beyond your grasp, let's try breaking this down into little baby bites:

Infidelity:

- Unfaithfulness, particularly in married persons; a violation of the marriage covenant by adultery or lewdness (Webster 1828)

- Violation of the marriage covenant by adultery; unfaithfulness to a charge, or to moral obligation (Webster 1913)

Adultery:

- Violation of the marriage bed; all manner of lewdness or unchastity, as in the seventh commandment (Webster 1828)

- The unfaithfulness of a married person to the marriage bed; sexual intercourse by a married man with another than his wife, or voluntary sexual intercourse by a married woman with another than her husband (Webster 1913)


You really should look up "consensual" and "voluntary" though, because they are rather important words which don't mean what you clearly think they do.

But I guess your admission was accurate that you do find being hateful easier than being informed.

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go back to the reddit forums 

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While that is a good platform for hateful and lazy masochists, I doubt this particular specimen possesses sufficient self-control to restrict themselves to embarrassing themselves there...

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indeed.

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WHOA, being in a poly relationship and cheating are two VERY different things! To be in a poly relationship everybody has to be informed of who's dating whom and doing what - EVERYBODY in the relationship is informed and consenting.

Of course, cheating does exist in poly relationships but that's a whole 'nother can of worms.

Obviously, nobody is forcing you to like it or be a part of it but saying that polyamory is adultery is just plain wrong.

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It's always a good idea to consult a proper dictionary or two first, before embarrassing oneself with such brazen dishonesty:

https://webstersdictionary1828.com/Dictionary/infidelity

https://webstersdictionary1828.com/Dictionary/adultery

https://www.websters1913.com/words/Infidelity

https://www.websters1913.com/words/Adultery

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Edit: Putting this as a reply to my own comment because this person blocked me after spouting their hateful bullshit so I can't reply to them LMAO But this is important for me to say so I will still post it. So if anyone's interested in what polyamory is and wants to be informed here you go:

Short answer:

Googled "definition of polyamory":

Googled "polyamory vs adultery":

Long answer using your sources:

Adultery as stated in your sources: "The unfaithfulness of a married person to the marriage bed; sexual intercourse by a married man with another than his wife, or voluntary sexual intercourse by a married woman with another than her husband."

1. If we want to be petty, the characters aren't married.

2. If a married couple wants to have a threesome, or bring a third into their relationship CONSENSUALLY that is still not adultery by this definition.

By the way, using this definition means married gay couples can't practice adultery. It also says that a married person making out or dry humping or being in love with someone else isn't considered adultery. 🤷‍♀️

Infidelity as stated in your sources: "3. Unfaithfulness, particularly in married persons; a violation of the marriage covenant by adultery or lewdness." and "4. Breach of trust; treachery; deceit; as the infidelity of a friend or a servant. In this sense, unfaithfulness is most used."

As I said in my previous comment and as stated in the screenshots of my google searches: polyamory is consensual. There is no lying. There is no deception. There is no unfaithfulness.

In conclusion:

Adultery and infidelity are not the same thing as polyamory.

I hope by now you and everybody else who thinks like you understand that: adultery is not polyamory, infidelity is not polyamory. And if you still refuse to accept the explanations that use sources provided by both you and me, well then I guess being hateful is easier than being informed. There is nothing else I can do for you.

I hope the next time someone tries to correct you or inform you, you will look at it from not only your angle but their angle as well. Good day.

I love Poly in IF I just don't know why if people like the IF then they shouldn't read simple is that instead ruining it for everyone else ty for giving everyone the run down what Poly really is <3

gonna be interesting to play

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I am a fool I would go for a revenge. Anyone touches my family's gonna pay an ultimate price of losing everything they cherished.

Looking good so far. Look forward to ending that bstards life though.

Is this still being continued?

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An update is coming soon! It's currently in beta and early access, check my tumblr @reapersbayif for more details.

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i found the poly routes if anyone is wondering

Marius/Marion & Elias/Eliana, Marius/Marion & Finn, Kai & Finn, Kai & Nishant/Nisha, Marius/Marion & Nishant/Nisha, Jayanta/Jayanti & Kai, Jayanta/Jayanti & Laurie.

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hi may i know if it's a V type poly or a poly where they all date each other? thanks!

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I'm fairly sure it's a poly where all are romantically involved (for every pairing), but you can check the creator's Tumblr page for more information.

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ooh thank you!

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It's pretty good so far, I'm already dying to know what going to happen next!≧﹏≦

it's pretty good so far!!

Just the description has me hooked, this is going to be amazing.

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being able to play a normal person working retail through all of this sounds hilarious and relatable I love it so far :D already interested in quite a few of the romance options they all sound fantastic

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Didn't read it yet...but holy smokes it looks so good....and so many ROs ✨ whattttt even!!

Edit: so I've read it, it's quite interesting and I'm so excited for more!!

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Well damn i was disappointed this was so short then i realized it's only chapter 1. Lol this was great. Marius seems like a character that will either be a riot or a pain in the ass. Looking forward to more in the future. 


Especially meeting Finn and Adrianus whose characters seems highly interesting. 

Thanks for making my sunday morning alil brighter.